Youtube Vdeos: Elevator Pitch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0GOh3nGlik
In this elevator pitch, I think it was a strength that he asked a question at the very beginning of his speech. He stated his opinions and back them up with facts about how this has worked before. He also used a wide variety of vocabulary. I Did not like that he talked more about himself and how he was right, more than what he was actually trying to state.  
 

                                       https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GNpuQHY2hDE
He reminded the person he was talking to, what exactly he was going to be talking about. He then "hyped up" what he was about to be talking about, without stating everything at once. I liked that he kept telling the guy how much better it could be and how he has never done a customer wrong, it probably kept the guy very interested. In the way he talked, he emphasized the big positive things like "sixty-thousand dollars!!"



                                         https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gHXKitKAT1E
In this elevator pitch, Will Smith stated the great qualities of what he was going to talk about. He stated the facts very bluntly by saying "Truth is, I was arrested", he got right to the point. I liked how confident he sounded in his speech. This speech was most different than the other two because he was really trying to prove himself and persuade them to take him seriously.


 
Did Not Meet Expectations
Met Expectations
Exceeded Expectations
Factual and informational
 
 
 
Stays on topic and engaged
 
 
 
States what studies you want to learn more in the discipline
 
 
 
States facts from the Articles
 
 
 
Organized/structured
 
 
 
Meets all requirements and slides to the power point
 
 
 

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